Hi, I think there is room for improvement. It is not clear to me exactly what the app does. At the beginning I thought it was an app to create real treasure hunts (like in a game). But now I think its a way to discover new places within an area? (Maybe I'm just stupid...but its the impression I got)
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Is there a social element on the app? Can you share your tours? Share your logs? I think that people would like to know that!
What is a "gem"? Who are the people that decide whether a place is a gem or not? Are they restaurants? Sights? Strip clubs?
I also think the 100% free for a limited time is confusing. Is it going to be 50% free later? I would revise the wording there...
I would also improve the design a bit, and change the background. It would be super cool to have something like a "pirate map" representation of NYC or some popular location in the background.
Hopefully this helps, I wish you good luck with your app!
>>Maybe I'm just stupid...but its the impression I got
Absolutely not! It's my job to be clear and based on your comment and other, I'm obviously falling short.
>>What is a "gem"? Who are the people that decide whether a place is a gem or not?
The "little gem" thing is a figure of speech but I see now that it could be confusing in the context of pitching a brand new product.
Wanderous has defined 8,000+ Points of Interest algorithmically by analyzing social and photo sharing geotags to determine where the destinations worth visiting in our world. Users are encouraged to explore places they wouldn't go otherwise by creating walking or driving tours between one or more of these destinations.
Love the treasure map idea but it's a bit outside of my skill level/budget for right now.
Is there a social element on the app? Can you share your tours? Share your logs? I think that people would like to know that!
What is a "gem"? Who are the people that decide whether a place is a gem or not? Are they restaurants? Sights? Strip clubs?
I also think the 100% free for a limited time is confusing. Is it going to be 50% free later? I would revise the wording there...
I would also improve the design a bit, and change the background. It would be super cool to have something like a "pirate map" representation of NYC or some popular location in the background.
Hopefully this helps, I wish you good luck with your app!